Six Sentence Sunday – 11/04/2012

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Happy Sunday,

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This six comes from my 2012 NaNoWriMo Entry that I’m currently working on.  It started from this short flash fiction piece on writing.com, and I’ve decided to expand on the Warlock character.  This is very early in the piece where the character is being introduced.

Please enjoy.

Arthur took a mug from the cabinet and placed it on the Formica counter.  He went to the fridge, grabbed the cream and poured some sweet n lo into his mug.  He took a spoon from the drawer under the counter, stirred his coffee and sat down at the kitchen table.  Arthur flipped his laptop open and began reading the news on the web.  He sipped his coffee and kept taking mental notes of the clock on the bottom tool bar of the computer.

“I really don’t want to go there”, he said to himself.

 As always, feel free to leave a comment or a correction.  I welcome all criticism and use it to learn and become better at this craft.

See you next Sunday!

Rob

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2 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday – 11/04/2012

  1. Chip Etier says:

    Where does he not want to go?
    Good hook for what follows.
    Nice six.

  2. Rae Renzi says:

    Great portrayal of procrastination…we all know how it feels, and you captured it perfectly.

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