Six Sentence Sunday – 2/05/2012

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Jason wiped his cheek and lunged towards the top of the stairs, prepared to hurt Sam.  

Sam’s grin turned sinister and his pupils glowed scarlet.

Jason froze.  His suspicions were confirmed.

“I know who you are”, Jason said.

“I’m glad you do young man”, Sam replied.

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See you next Sunday!

Rob

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5 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday – 2/05/2012

  1. Sort of like the “Darth Vadar tells Luke” moment, though horror, non fantasy. Cool! I’ll definitely be back next week.

  2. Alix Cameron says:

    Good solid dialogue that pushes the plot, a great six!

  3. Great action and dialogue here!

  4. Dee Carney says:

    Wait! I wanna know who he is! (Great six!)

  5. Nick Kelly says:

    Sets the tension very well. Looking forward to some more!

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